there in front of me,
a one track mind –
hell bent on survival.
like a Bedouin
in great obscurity,
a knight needed with armor
is havoc to invaders.
bloodlines an art –
history lessons seep out.
thoroughbred needed:
a muthafuckin fighter !!
there in front of me,
a one track mind –
hell bent on survival.
like a Bedouin
in great obscurity,
a knight needed with armor
is havoc to invaders.
bloodlines an art –
history lessons seep out.
thoroughbred needed:
a muthafuckin fighter !!
Keep fighting, Don.
thanx susan – just trying to keep it all together. just one of many avenues i’m using.
I like how this builds very classic images and then ends with a bang using modern slang. The poem itself seems cryptic when looking for speciifc meaning, but the overall effect certainly hits the reader. I always like that kind of poem, because you can read them repeatedly and always find SOMETHING new.
modern slang it is !! yes, certainly some classic here. this piece and the last piece are a part of what I am going through at the moment. glad that you liked the depth of the piece.
Hellz yeah.This guy is like some kind of survivalist Frankenstein.
thanks Seb, needed some kind of re-enforcement due to a colossal event in life.