there comes a time
when you hold out your heart
that everything seems
like it will fall into place.
then you find
that looking for the one
can be tougher
when looking for relief
to bring it altogether
to set the past free.
when you are looking
for the comfort of another hand
to pull you into that warm embrace
to kickstart your heart
so you are not alone.
let the walls come crashing down
and she’ll pull you together
if you’ll trust her mending spirit
to fly into love once again.
best line !!!! “set the past free ”
i agree – let it go 🙂
great poem ……
very much appreciated cat:)) i just wanted it to have a universal type appeal and to kinda have it in a lyrical mindset. if only i knew how to compose musically would be a plus.
Hey – we all do things differently but the same you know ? smiles ..:) life is about creating any which way we can ……..
it’s very universally hearted – your poem …..:) awesome 🙂 have a good night 🙂
oh so hopeful and free!
when it’s accomplished it’s the only way to go. finding that writing does bring a little luck. it’s not in the full range yet, but it’s coming along nice and slowly as to a femme:)