trapped, no way through,
the lines behind
got longer and longer.
bridge swayed –
life jammed in major pickles.
stagnant
through the years
in all the complacencies
finally broke free.
rebuilt
in the feel
of the terra nova
laid down by the poets,
and philosophers
in the settings of the sun.
that aura,
like energized pathways
to all the fingers
of new roadways
leading to all the great seas
for all the great sails
when the lines
peak on a new horizon.
This is really good. I especially love the image at the end. I love the energy running through this.
thanx lora. it looks like this one works out by the likes and such. the ending i thought was pretty neat. again your comment is appreciated.